From Charles I have look through your two posters and your advert and I think they are very good. With the first poster were it’s got the colourful pattern in the background I think it’s good because it is a recognisable pattern, the colours make it standout and the shapes used make it look good. I do think it doesn’t contain enough information to know what the products about and because it’s a new product on the market people wouldn’t understand what the posters about, not like a big company like Cadburys were the purple colour alone makes it so recognisable. The second poster is good because it gives a lot more information on the camera and still has a good design aspect, with the background the camera is on. The only thing is there are a lot of white spaces around which makes it very plain and wouldn’t make it stand out to a potential customer. I think the advert is also very good because it contains a good concept and the fact that you are putting an idea of what you could use the camera for. This would appeal to a lot of the adult market because they would relate it to when there kids were having birthday parties and they would want to save the memories from them. A couple of things I think you could improve on this advert would be to maybe change the speaking the voice is fine I just think it needs to flow more to make it the easiest possible to understand. Also I think if you could incorporate maybe something to do with a teenager into the advert because I could widen the market segment of your product a lot more.
Little to nothing has happened to your blog since December. Your coursework is 50% of your A2, currently you are looking at a U. You need to put some serious effort into this otherwise the best possible grade you can get overall (including the exam) is an E
From Charles
ReplyDeleteI have look through your two posters and your advert and I think they are very good. With the first poster were it’s got the colourful pattern in the background I think it’s good because it is a recognisable pattern, the colours make it standout and the shapes used make it look good. I do think it doesn’t contain enough information to know what the products about and because it’s a new product on the market people wouldn’t understand what the posters about, not like a big company like Cadburys were the purple colour alone makes it so recognisable.
The second poster is good because it gives a lot more information on the camera and still has a good design aspect, with the background the camera is on. The only thing is there are a lot of white spaces around which makes it very plain and wouldn’t make it stand out to a potential customer.
I think the advert is also very good because it contains a good concept and the fact that you are putting an idea of what you could use the camera for. This would appeal to a lot of the adult market because they would relate it to when there kids were having birthday parties and they would want to save the memories from them. A couple of things I think you could improve on this advert would be to maybe change the speaking the voice is fine I just think it needs to flow more to make it the easiest possible to understand. Also I think if you could incorporate maybe something to do with a teenager into the advert because I could widen the market segment of your product a lot more.
Robyn and Sam.
ReplyDeleteLittle to nothing has happened to your blog since December. Your coursework is 50% of your A2, currently you are looking at a U. You need to put some serious effort into this otherwise the best possible grade you can get overall (including the exam) is an E